“A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth.”
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Thursday, September 2, 2010

My Own Haiku Rules


Haiku tradition,
nature-centered poetry.
Mine is not that way.

MS changes rules.
My nature has a new look.
It is not just trees.

In stretching the rules
I give wings to my spirit
which MS can’t kill.

5 comments:

Diane J Standiford said...

Ms CAN kill some people's spirit, but I see it will not harm YOURS!!

Have Myelin? said...

MS makes YOUR creative roots grows! =)

Peace Be With You said...

Diane, thank YOU.

Sherry, aren't I lucky to get something positive out of this.

Thanks for stopping by, guys.

Judy

Muffie said...

Judy, while haiku (originally hokku) portrayed scenes in the natural world, it also recognized human emotions and a striving for peace. Your poems do all that and more!
Thanks for sharing them with us.
Peace,
Muff

Peace Be With You said...

Thanks, Muff. I didn't know that. I love learning new stuff. Now I feel legit. :-)
Judy